Dear diary,
yesterday Harry, Ron and me waent to a terrific adventure.
we followed profesor Quirl and saw amazing things!
. we saw a huge dog with three heads named Flaphi!
. we were stuck inside a big plant that only lets go from you if you are calm!
. we founed a flying key that Harry catched with an old broom.
. Ron won a chess game by sacrificing himself.
. Harry burned Quirl's face with his hands.
So diary are my stories intersting? I think so!
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ReplyDeleteDear diary,
Yesterday Harry, Ron and I went on a terrific adventure.
We followed professor Quirl and saw amazing things!
. we saw a huge dog with three heads named Flaphi!
. we were stuck inside a big plant that only lets go of you if you are calm!
. we founed a flying key that Harry caught with an old broom.
. Ron won a chess game by sacrificing himself.
. Harry burned Quirl's face with his hands.
Good work!